User blog comment:CaffeineEnthusiast/Fanfiction Completed 2.2/@comment-26919297-20151110032041

Dimension hopping shenanigans yessssssssssssss!

Based on Lenka's presence, I'm assuming you're doing a version on the anime? Or maybe both? Anyways, looking forward for more!

And, um... Furanku-san... May I suggest something?

What if you start a new paragraph when a different person begins speaking?? I often make a mistake of thinking this guy said that instead of the other guy and... Eep. Maybe it's just my eyes derping on me @_@

Great chapter, anyways!