User blog comment:Nemesisdevil98/Freedom Wars x God Eater : Chapter 2 : Why Today?/@comment-26113680-20150902161532

Yay for continuing ^^

I'm not trying to demoralize you here Devil, but if you would like to heed a small advice. Try to seperate it a bit, so it will not cling together.

Makes it somewhat easier for the eye to read.

Other than that, keep it up!