Thread:Seieireppa/@comment-28134760-20160413224717/@comment-1419424-20160414021427

And I'm not trying to perpetuate a fight.

And as for the other edits? I'm not going to mince words here: the grammar was bad and the sentence structure stood out like a sore thumb against the style of the rest of the synopsis. I curate this wiki not only for its users, like you or me, but for anyone who comes here looking for information, and for that end I will do what I feel will lend itself to as clear a presentation of information as possible. I get that you tried your best, but...

Oh, and please don't take this to mean that I'm angry at you. Believe me, I most certainly am not. But I did not feel that your edits fit the article, both in terms of content and style.