User blog comment:One-Eyed Serpent/Never Stand Alone (ARC 2) - Chapter 8 - We "Finally" Meet/@comment-29970696-20151210113232

Wow you're doing Third Person, well here's a tip for that if you're having a hard time. Imagine that YOU are witnessing the event that is going on and write it down, be sure that it somehow captures it real good or people will get confused

(PS I too am in a writer's block)