User blog:CaffeineEnthusiast/To try out a style

So I saw some people's style of writing, gonna probably try it on the first part of God Eater: Generation series

Chapter 1 (not really)
Ken Kujo (While carrying a sack of food): This day really sucks


 * Opens the door to his house and sees two strange people

Ken Kujo: Uh.... Mom who are these people?

Adalina Kujo: Oh! They're your father's friends apparently, they want to talk to you

Man in suit A: Ken, we've been expecting you

Ken Kujo: What do you want? You've killed my dad already and now you want to kill my mom?A

Man in suit B: What did you say about Fen-

Man in suit A: Calm down, we don't want to hurt the possible New-Type

Ken Kujo: What the hell are you two talking about

(To be rewritten in a better form)